Book 3 - Chapter 6

[junkoc]

What an exciting and moving chapter! The description of Ace's fall was so vivid that I could see where he was going, and what he was feeling. Especially, the fear of unknown and uncertainty in the darkness felt so true. I am glad that everybody was all right. And high five for Ace to leading his team for the safety. They really worked together very well to get out from this devastating and almost hopeless situation, didn't they? It was also very moving. I was crying by the end. Thank you very much for this wonderful chapter.

This week's drawing is the scene when Will lighted up a match; the moment when they found a hope.

Now, I hardly can wait for the next adventure.

Jun

[Susan]

Thank you, Jun, it's really encouraging to know it felt vivid, and you could feel what was happening. Yes, they did some good team work here, our elves!
I'm glad you thought it was moving. I thought your drawing was moving, too - I felt a lump in my throat when I saw what scene you had chosen, and I love the way you've captured their ragged appearance and their moment of hope. The way they stand in a little pool of light says it all. Thanks so much for this lovely illustration.
Susan